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[moonscale]: Ya that sounds way better. I'm still uncertain though. Because I'm not so sure about the accuracy of you examples. I don't know the decible system that well but I'm pretty sure that the range you mentioned is way too small. Isn't 80 decibles the loudest you can listen to music before it makes you deaf? But I think I'd rather say the whole low and high frequency thing.
[Talkris]: He just pulled numbers out of his ass. Its your char, you can look up the decible system and such if you are so inclined.
[Fizban]: Indeed, they were merely an example without the time of a googling to find the real numbers lol
[Talkris]: Alright, you're all done with the bio sheet. You just need to give the sample post as described on the character page.
[moonscale]: Phew. Alright. :) .....why a bar? are there bars in the institute? or should i do it as if she had managed to escape? or does it matter?
[Talkris]: No particular reason for a bar. Its just a test. Just have your character walk into a bar.
[moonscale]: Sadui walked into a bar, swinging her hips side to side in an unnatural manner. Even when she walked directly under the loudspeakers, she didn't seem to notice the music blaring from them. She sat down and looked around, carefully shading her eyes from view under the curtain of green-orange hair that flopped down from the thick headband around her ears.
[Fizban]: 2 things
1 just remember that you will not have any of those weapons while in the institute, no one is allowed weapons.
and 2
what do you wnat yourwatcher to be like, as I am playing him/her.
[Talkris]: Is what you wrote your sample post? I don't know if I told you this already or not, but your actual posts must be longer and more descriptive then that. Look in the history page and you'll see a current IM-RP between Filliadorma and I. That is the length I'd like the see the posts in the RP. It makes for a better read and pushes your abilities a bit further. You did well enoug describing what your character was doing, but you didn't go into enough detail about where she was. What was the bar like? Does it have a smell? Lit well? Was it crowded? You need to keep these things in mind when writing, alright?
[moonscale]: oh, i thought they were supposed to have weapons? well she can keep the spike can't she, because its a secret.
I don't know. I imagined him as a rather harasd/ nervous youang man who is always somwhat stessed and chaotic. But I guess its up to you.
[Fizban]: no hun, it's not up to me, it's up to you lol :). I am asking you becasue I want you to choose what your wather will be like.
harassed nervous young man?...okay, who is he harrassed bye?
She can have weapons, but they dont allow them outside of assignment...t
however, how could your character have a secret weapon? A poisined spike would be supplied to her by the institute, it's not like you could make it, you wouldnt know how, having never been taught, nor would you be given the supplied.
:/
[Talkris]: No, she can't keep the spike.
[Fizban]: It's okay outside of the institute, but it would make no sense to have it inside of the intittue.
[Talkris]: Actually, I don't even think she would be allowed poison outside of the institute because it just doesn't seem very practical to me. Everyone they will be facing has guns and bombs. Poison hardly can take effect by then. Understand?
[moonscale]: Yes, but I did explain how she got it... I think its not what you mean but I can take it out.
[Fizban]: bombs...I want bombs now...lol, bombs are fun.
[Talkris]: When/where did you explain it?
[moonscale]: Oops, i took it out again. I said that she stole a compass rom her math lesson and removed the spike and kept it (the spike).
[Talkris]: No, that seems improbable. The lessons are kept one on one with the watchers. Besides, that doesn't explain how the poison came about.
Here, have you ever been to or known someone in a mental institute? Because that is the best example of how the seeds are treated.
[Fizban]: ooh,...
so how did she get the necessary tools to hollow out the pin, and then fix it so it didnt leadk out poisin unless enough force was exerted such as you stabbing it into someone, and where were you supplied the poisin.
There are all those practical problems to it.
[moonscale]: Its nt hollow, just a sort of film on the surface, its stuck in her headband so it wont affect her.
It is very crude.
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