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Username: [moonscale]
Character name: Sadui (5-0316-5541-288)
Species/creature/race: Seed
Alignment: 5th generation seed. She lives at the Institute but wants to get out. 
Gender:Female
Appearance: She is not quite perfect, but appears close to it. She looks closer to the younger generations than she actually is until one looks closer at her. She is very pale and she looks like she has no irises whatsoever. Her ears are different. She is very selfconcious but tries to be feminine because it makes her feel more human. Her eyelashes and eyebrows are white, but her hair is streaky orange and green.
Age: 15 yrs
Ears:They are uneven, one is narrow and longer and the other is broader and shorter. 
Skin:Very pale, but almost natural. Not albino.
Hair: Her hair is orange-green and spiky. It's the only thing she likes about herself.
Height: 5'
Body built: Thin, but not overly so.
Tattoos/Peircings: She tattood a small sun on her shoulder with a compass that she stole during her lessons. 
Clothes: She modified a hospital gown that was way too large so she made it into a 'dress.' She also covers her ears with a scarf she wears as a thick hairband. 
Preferred weapons: She has a two small pistols which she usually keeps hidden in her dress since she doesn't like to be seen with weapons, even though she is only issued the when on an assignment.
Characteristics: Sadui wants desperately to live as a human. She tries to act as girly as possible. She knows some things about the outside world due to her special ablities. She is intelligent, but unpredictable. She is not very strong and doesn't particularily want to be.
Personality: Sadui's emotions are wildly erratic. She often becomes randomly angry or sad or happy for no reason whatsoever. She gets temporary obsessions that fade after a time. Once she started trying to write on all the walls, then threw a tantrum when she decided she wanted her walls white again.
Sadui has been mistaken for a younger, perfect seed whenever she has her hair covered. Whenever someone realizes she is less perfect, she sees their dissapointment. She has grown to hate the other seeds very much, especially those younger than her. The elder seeds she treats with scorn. It makes her feel more superior.
Likes: Her likes, other than her hair, change almost every month or two. She like pretending she's human.
Dislikes: Her ears, all other people, especially seeds. 
Abilities:Sadui's right, larger ear can hear very low frequencies. It acts like an antenna. It is difficult for her to concentrate on one sound, however. If she tries to listen to one conversation she will often hear something else in the vicinity. Her left ear can hear high frequencies. This often makes it difficult for her to focus on any sound. She usually has earplugs under her hairband. It also makes her very dizzy, she can't stand while "listening in" and fints after a few minutes. She often becomes temporarily deaf after she strains her ability. 
She can shoot well. She can sign and understand sign language very well as she is sporadically deaf due to her special ability.
Weaknesses: Sadui has barely any physical strength. She wants to be human, and wants everything that would make her seem more "normal."
History: Sadui was lucky as far as seeds go, the many tests never bothered her as much as some of her siblings, she went so far as to tattoo herself. Her watcher once told her that all children have to go to the doctors and she loves being the center of attention. She also enjoyed her lessons. Her watcher learned that the only thing she needed to convince her to do something was to tell her that humans did it. This subtle form of blackmail made her life much less traumatic that of her siblings.
other: In her 'listening in' she learned and adopted some human habits. She asked her watcher for make-up.


Sample Post:
Sadui stood in front of the bar door and licked her lips nervously tasting the stale smoke in the air before walking in with a slow staggering gait. She swung her hips side to side in an unnnatural manner as if she were dancing to some music. Yet even when she passed directly under the loudspeakers blasting a thumping beat she did not react or walk in synchronity with the rhythm. She sat down on a bar stool in a corner where she could watch the people easily. Sadui spun to face the bar, wincing at the loud squeak that was inaudible to anyone but her. She sat, looking fornlornly at the other people sitting elsewhere throughout the room. She listened with out trying to, catching snatches of conversation from every corner of the room. Have you?...then he...but what if?...maybe...you know you can't! She shivered and folded her arms across her chest as if trying to protect herself from the voices. Her brightly roughed cheeks stood up harshly against her pale skin. Combined with her luminous white eyes her face seemed corpslike and feverish. She felt slightly nauseous. There were so many different sounds! "I'll have a martini." she said almost silently. Then attempted to ask again for the only drink she knew. "I'll have a martini!" she said in a voice loud enough to draw attention from her neighbors. She blushed as she saw the heads turn and dug her nails into the palm of her hand. Why couldn't I be like them? Why? She bowed her head, closing her eyes to shut out the pain and lock away their alieness. The soft hum of some machine dronned loudly in her skull. She propped her face up in her hands, covering her ears even more. Her hair slipped forward from under her headband. She sighed. It was just another reminder of what made her different.


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[moonscale]: Ya that sounds way better. I'm still uncertain though. Because I'm not so sure about the accuracy of you examples. I don't know the decible system that well but I'm pretty sure that the range you mentioned is way too small. Isn't 80 decibles the loudest you can listen to music before it makes you deaf? But I think I'd rather say the whole low and high frequency thing. 

[Talkris]: He just pulled numbers out of his ass. Its your char, you can look up the decible system and such if you are so inclined.

[Fizban]: Indeed, they were merely an example without the time of a googling to find the real numbers lol

[Talkris]: Alright, you're all done with the bio sheet. You just need to give the sample post as described on the character page.

[moonscale]: Phew. Alright. :)  .....why a bar? are there bars in the institute? or should i do it as if she had managed to escape? or does it matter? 

[Talkris]: No particular reason for a bar. Its just a test. Just have your character walk into a bar.

[moonscale]: Sadui walked into a bar, swinging her hips side to side in an unnatural manner.  Even when she walked directly under the loudspeakers, she didn't seem to notice the music blaring from them. She sat down and looked around, carefully shading her eyes from view under the curtain of green-orange hair that flopped down from the thick headband around her ears.

[Fizban]: 2 things

1 just remember that you will not have any of those weapons while in the institute, no one is allowed weapons.

and 2

what do you wnat yourwatcher to be like, as I am playing him/her.

[Talkris]: Is what you wrote your sample post? I don't know if I told you this already or not, but your actual posts must be longer and more descriptive then that. Look in the history page and you'll see a current IM-RP between Filliadorma and I. That is the length I'd like the see the posts in the RP. It makes for a better read and pushes your abilities a bit further. You did well enoug describing what your character was doing, but you didn't go into enough detail about where she was. What was the bar like? Does it have a smell? Lit well? Was it crowded? You need to keep these things in mind when writing, alright?

[moonscale]: oh, i thought they were supposed to have weapons? well she can keep the spike can't she, because its a secret.
I don't know. I imagined him as a rather harasd/ nervous youang man who is always somwhat stessed and chaotic. But I guess its up to you.

[Fizban]: no hun, it's not up to me, it's up to you lol :). I am asking you becasue I want you to choose what your wather will be like.

harassed nervous young man?...okay, who is he harrassed bye?


She can have weapons, but they dont allow them outside of assignment...the doctors dont have weapons or anything, so it's not like they can stop if you if you decide to go on a killing spree with your guns. So you arent allowed them in the complex,...(only one char, talkris's is, and thast because his character cannot live without his guns, he will through tantrums till he is fatigued, and he will do it over and over again till they are returned. I his case his ammo is just taken away, making his gun useless.)

however, how could your character have a secret weapon? A poisined spike would be supplied to her by the institute, it's not like you could make it, you wouldnt know how, having never been taught, nor would you be given the supplied.

:/

[Talkris]: No, she can't keep the spike.

[Fizban]: It's okay outside of the institute, but it would make no sense to have it inside of the intittue.

[Talkris]: Actually, I don't even think she would be allowed poison outside of the institute because it just doesn't seem very practical to me. Everyone they will be facing has guns and bombs. Poison hardly can take effect by then. Understand?

[moonscale]: Yes, but I did explain how she got it... I think its not what you mean but I can take it out.

[Fizban]: bombs...I want bombs now...lol, bombs are fun.

[Talkris]: When/where did you explain it?

[moonscale]: Oops, i took it out again. I said that she stole a compass rom her math lesson and removed the spike and kept it (the spike).

[Talkris]: No, that seems improbable. The lessons are kept one on one with the watchers. Besides, that doesn't explain how the poison came about.

Here, have you ever been to or known someone in a mental institute? Because that is the best example of how the seeds are treated.

[Fizban]: ooh,...

so how did she get the necessary tools to hollow out the pin, and then fix it so it didnt leadk out poisin unless enough force was exerted such as you stabbing it into someone, and where were you supplied the poisin.

There are all those practical problems to it.

[moonscale]: Its nt hollow, just a sort of film on the surface, its stuck in her headband so it wont affect her.
It is very crude.

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